Wednesday, May 5, 2010

Story written by a second grader

"Once upon a time there were four golf scorpions but the thing that was scare about them was that nobody know they were scorpions and one day they were at a party an it was time for them to changed to scorpions and somebody had push them in the water and they got killed and all the people said hey what happen to the world when they looked at the sky the moon was on fire and the scorpions was poisonous. The End."
-Jarvezz G.

1 comment:

  1. haha, awesome
    i wish i could write without punctuation those were the good days when i didnt use punctuation i remember when i didnt know how to use a comma so i put, it, after, every, word,

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